The audio quality has improved drastically from your previous reel, but I feel like you also toned down your performance by a substantial amount out of fear of clipping your audio. In this reel, you feel a lot more restrained, which detracts from the organic feeling your previous reel had; here, it feels more like you're reading from a script than conveying a character's emotions. Play up on the cartooniness of the scene if need be -- your high-energy characters in your previous reel were definitely some of your stronger ones.

Just try to maintain the same level of energy your previous performance displayed. If you can keep that energy with the same quality this reel has, and you'll have yourself a pretty solid reel.

You have a fantastic voice for this type of commercial VO, and definitely do a good job of covering the script with a nice, steady pace. My only real criticism is that the audio sounds pretty raw. Try to edit out or at least lower the volume of your breathing between lines - a bit of editing will really push the difference between making this a good reel and making it a great reel.

You have a great voice for commercial voiceovers, and do a good job for the most part of capturing the energy that clients look for in a VO, but a few of your commercials seemed to lack the same type of energy that you could feel in, say, your Hot Wheels commercial.

Work a bit on emphasizing your changes in vocal inflection, where it's warranted. Once you make your weaker commercials a bit less flat, you'll have a really solid demo reel.